这也是帮一个同学改的四级作文吧,也不知道是四级还是六级了,呵呵.这次改的过程中我尽可能地保留了他原来的东西.以前我改别人的作文总是最后自己干脆写一篇,仿佛觉得只有自己写的才是最好最切题的,哈哈.以后不会了.这篇作文我也写过N次了,看到都有点烦了,呵呵.希望看这篇文章的人不要烦啦!
深圳大学 赖小琪
Living in the cities or countryside has become a prevalent discussion. Different people hold various opinions on this issue. Some people are inclined to city life while others prefer to live in the countryside. They all have their versions.
Those who show great affection to live in the cities argue that city life appreciates more advantages. Living in large cities , people can enjoy more convenience of life . To begin with, people can choose a great variety of goods in supermarkets, big department stores , or chain stores, which indicates a high living standard of modern people. Furthermore, city dwellers can generally acquire prior and sounder medical treatment in well equipped hospitals and obtain better education. Last but not the least, obviously the cultural life in cities is more abundant that endows people with easy access to museums, concerts, cinemas and so forth.
However, many still give their priority to countryside life. They insist that life in countryside does more favor to people’s health in that it is free from polluted environment. They can breathe fresher air and eat fresher food at a low price. Moreover, country life has been less of a target for criminals than city life. Thereby it is more quiet and peaceful.
To my mind, I tend to live in cities, because countryside is relatively inconvenient and isolated , while cities are more open and have more complete infrastructure and other updated facilities, which can largely facilitate our high-paced life. With the rapid development of cities, I firmly believe the environment of cities will better all the time and attract more and more people to settle in it. |
